I liked it! Here's my layout:
Supplies (all SU!): Cardstock (Rich Razzleberry, Whisper White); Razzleberry Lemonade DSP; Stamps (Circle Circus, Jumble Alphabet, Contempo Alphabet); Punches (Modern Label, Boho Flowers, Scallop Edge, Scallop Circle, 1 1/4" circle, Word Window); Silver Brads, ink (Pumpkin Pie, Rich Razzleberry, VersaMark); Black Stampin' Emboss powder.
Link me up in the comments if you create something based on this sketch... I'd love to see!